Thursday, March 08, 2007

About Us: The Final Word?

You all have copies of the various "About Us" versions. Using all the contributions so far and whatever other fresh ideas you may have, post a "final" version for us to see. We may need to vote on it!

5 comments:

Stacey said...

The Pearson Buzz—Tagline—About Us.

We are the Writing 12 class of 2007. We are a multi-cultural group of students attending Pearson Adult Learning Center. Here we introduce The Pearson Buzz, an online student newspaper centering on life and school activities. You can find travel information and parenting advice. Looking for some entertainment? Look no further. Our in-class relationship Guru can help you with your love life. Learn where the latest and greatest musical entertainment will be happening. Got a rant or rave you need to get off your chest? Let us know and we’ll make it public. We also run a recipe column and you can look forward to a varied menu with all the flavors of the world from our international students. Our class looks forward to reporting local and not so local human interest stories.

Stacey said...

Oops, guess I messed up here. I don't have copies of other students about us documents.

Catherine said...

Welcome!

We are mothers.
We are fathers.
We are writers.
we are dreamers.
We are students
who come from different countries.
If you enjoy reading,
or have a passion for writing,
Please come with us
and share your stories in our own place—
The Pearson Buzz!

Brad said...

Stacey,

Your copy would suit the home page as a good general introduction to the paper. Very good. In other words, the lead article the first week.

For "About Us" I'd like to see something shorter and more generic. Maybe Catherine's is too short, but it gets the gist across.

Ritsuko said...

The Pearson Buzz—Enjoy being a writer

The Pearson Buzz is a place where we, the student writers at Writing 12, exchange our diverse idea, knowledge and experience to improve our communication skill. For more information, please send us a mail here: Contact us

Pearson Adult Learning Centre supports this home page. If you need school information, please visit: http://palc.sd40.bc.ca

We also welcome guest writers. If you are interested to be a writer, you can send your article to the editor. Let us read your writing.

We appreciate any comments from you.

From the staff of The Pearson Buzz



Hi everyone.

I chose the words and the ideas from Olivia, Catherine, Larry, Rosaria and Natalia in the handout.

Is it too simple? (I feel so!)