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A place for Writing 12 students to read each other's writing, to critique, to suggest, to improve.
About Me
- Brad
- Former adult teacher who loves island beaches. Happy homebody and family man; once devoted dog owner, now without Tashi, my Tibetan Terrier. I prefer the absurdity of the imagination to the absurdity of imagining nothing.
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“Did you see the new Iphone Johnny got yesterday?” Fred sighed.
“No. Was it nice?” his wife said, although she really couldn’t care less about the latest phone.
“Oh, yes. My God, I wish I had one, too. You should see the screen on that thing! Did you know you can use the Internet and everything?”
But Fred’s wife had gone into the kitchen to make supper and didn’t hear him at all.
--73 words
This is my characterisitics on jealous, hope you like it:
Since I’m the baby of my family, and apple of my family, whenever my birthday comes every year, I’m always getting birthday party, biggest birthday cake, and expects my family to get many gifts for me, or give me money as a late birthday gift. I’m always getting what I want on my birthday, and getting my birthday gifts. Last year I cried while eating a birthday cake because I felt so lonely, and didn’t get any birthday parties, or birthday gifts.
Words:83.
“I got a new job at Urban Behaviour and the salary is ten dollars per hour,” said Andrew.
Oh my God, you’re so lucky,” said Annie, “you are getting eight dollars and sixty cents here and I haven’t even caught up with you yet and now you’re getting ten dollars per hour.”
“I’ll apply there so I can get the same salary, too,” she continued. Andrew looked at her, smiled, and said, “That’ll be great”.
--75 words
The Jealous Character:
"Who were you talking with on the phone?" Larry asked Catherine, and pretended not caring.
"Tiger Chen, my golf coach." answered Catherine without raising her eyelid.
"Oh, it's that guy he thought his swing looks like Tiger Woods?"
"Yes, it’s he. Actually, I think his swing is as beautiful as Tiger Wood."
"Come on, don't make me sick, please." Larry laughed out loud:" He is nothing but a paper tiger only."
71 words
A Jealous Character
“I know she thought she’s better than me. Yes, she IS a good looking girl and every boy wants to date her. But so what? Dose she have any LV? No, she doesn’t because she doesn’t have a rich father like I! Yes, I will show her my new handbag next Monday, another LV!”
Susan felt better now.
A jealous girl
“Mom, where is my new dress? ” Betsy shouted raucously when she just stepped home from kindergarten. “ Tomorrow I will wear that,” she said with a resolute voice.
“Why? ” her mother asked mindful.
“Today teacher remarked Susan’s dress is more beautiful than me,” she grumbled, and bounced into her room, opened her wardrobe, fluttered her clothes quickly.
“Come down,” her mother said calmly, “You can’t . That’s for your Christmas party.”
“No,” Betsy gave a roar, banged the wardrobe’s door shut, and rushed out of her room.
It was the final day of the competition. All fashion models tried their best to show themselves. There’s no exception to Hazel and Wendy. In fact, the champion would come out from two of them. The last round began. Every model wore evening gown, and Wendy who wore the most gorgeous gown with long tail stood in front of hazel. Hazel secretly placed her left foot onto the long tail…
The Jealous Character
A group of students have a chat about their terminal test.
"A is good at many aspects. He is number one I think"
"B is excellent too.They are much the same."
"I hope I could catch up with them."
Hearing the praise about A and B, one student said: "Once a time I got a letter A too.it's just I'm not often in good condition."
Words: 69
Cherry was standing in front of the stage, hugging the champion with congratulation for her beauty contest crown.
There was something biting her heart with an artificial smile on her face.
“Why? Why it is her? Not me?” she shouted in her heart, bearing a torture in her mind.
-48 words
Mary paced in front of the window. Outside, a willow tree was swinging in the summer breeze. Under the tree, John was chatting with a pretty girl with a sweet smile.
She was supposed to date with John in this party and was dressed up fit to kill. However, John was captivated by such a little, pale girl.
“What should I do?” She desperately muttered, staring at the girl with anger.
-71 words
The Jealous Character
“I really cannot bear those so –called “loving couples” showing their intimation here.” Lily whispered to her girlfriend on Sunday morning during the church sermon. “To us or to God?” Lily teased them. “Do their really need to show other people how close they are and snuggle with each other in a public area?” Lily frowned and curled her lips, “I never let my husband put his hand on my shoulder; that will mass up my hair only…”
83 words
Parvaneh spined her wide eyes at Sara. Sara was flaunting in her new pink gown- "There she..." Parvaneh muttered-" slot!" -Sara in her dance circle approached to Parvaneh-"How I am looking?" and gone with another swirl like a breeze. Parvaneh flamed. She breath deeply to control herself, but it was impossible,"you look too..." emphasised "fancy!"
“Hi Martin”, said Patty while peering at her boyfriend.
“Such a cold greeting honey. What happened?”, Martin said .
“When I was coming, I saw you talking with the same girl”, Patty answered ironically.
Martin was annoyed: “Come on Patty. She’s my classmate. I just told you that yesterday”.
“But you seemed very entertained”, Patty mumbled looking at the floor.
“What did you say? I was just talking with her. You drive me crazy”; Martin walked away.
A Jealous Character
A man went a trip with his mother and wife. Just before he was going to take a picture for the two women, he suddenly noticed some dust on her wife’s white dress. “Look at your dress!” He quickly dropped the camera, stepping over, bending down on his knees, wiping her dress with his bare hand. “It is ok!” Her wife moved her body with uneasiness, while her mother in law was standing beside with a weighty and dark cloud on her face.
One summer morning,While feeble streaks of early sunshine was entering through my window blinds and illuminating my room,-like gateways to heaven-a flashback of the previous night played inside my head.
I remembered the way she caressed his face.The kiss that i saw behind a curtain,
then, the part where she opened her self and let her naked body and soul touch his'.
I recalled the sound her voice, shouting his name, as well as the decieving laughter of two heartless clowns.And of course, I will never forget the look in their eyes;the eyes of a hungry wolf that has found a flesh to be devoured.
I moved out from my bed,looked at the mirror and I saw her face.
It reminded me of a certain feeling,a feeling that was hard to explain.
The feeling that poisoned heart and mind.It has revealed itslef the moment when my love for her transformed into hate.It was the pain that crawled deep inside me while I was watching my dreams being fulfilled in someone else's reality.
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