Mushroom Necklaces
Cleaning the Well
Neptune Festival
Special Summer Ritual
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- Brad
- Former adult teacher who loves island beaches. Happy homebody and family man; once devoted dog owner, now without Tashi, my Tibetan Terrier. I prefer the absurdity of the imagination to the absurdity of imagining nothing.
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Brad,
I don't know whether or not to post this paragraph regarding the story why I chose it.
The story about“The Mushroom Necklaces” by Margaret is quite impressive. The traditional activity is like a festival. Readers could be motivated to explore a new hobby, for the forest contains so many beneficial things, such as, the scent of trees, the crystal dews, the peaceful silence; and the feelings that you experience when you find a mushroom in a hidden spot. To get up early and enjoy the natural atmosphere and exercise are healthy. The annual tradition is conducive to developing a diversified entertainment and draw public interest.
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A Special Summer Ritual ( draft 2 )
"A Special Summer Ritual" is a genre painting about a Chinese traditional festival. Hai Yan Yan described the process in her family detailedly.You would view the solemn and cheerful ritual. You would sense the true feelings to their ancestors.
The Neptune Festival (draft 1 )
Lanterns and coloured figures of octopus and fishes decorated the way to the beach of Black Sea.The "pirates" scared and threw people into the sea. Water pouring suddenly made people soaked and laughing.Neptune Tsar came from the sea and gave his "sea gifts" generously.The carnival continued to the midnight....If you have no chance to participate this rememberable festival, you must read Victoria's essay "The Neptune Festival" at least.
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