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Monday, December 18, 2006

Brad's Edits: Latest Additions (January 8, 2007)

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NEW: Corrections to, "I Prefer," Catherine's List Poem
NEW: Corrections to, "Untitled," Larry's List Poem


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Corrections to "Choices," Ritsuko's List Poem
Corrections to "Possibilities," Helena's List Poem
Corrections to "Faith," May's List Poem
Edit of "Alone," May's Specific Vocabulary Story
Edit of "Casablanca," Helena's 13 Year Old
Edit of "A Wolf and a Little Girl," Choi's Specific Vocabulary Story
Edit of "A Custard Pudding," Ritsuko's 13 Year Old
Edit of "Swimmers," Catherine's 13 Year Old
Edit of "Note from Mathew C.," Hiromi's 13 Year Old
Edit of "Oh, Mary," Larry's 13 Year Old
Posted by Brad at 5:10 PM

1 comment:

Ritsuko said...

Brad

Thank you very much for the corrections for my writings.

And,
A Happy New Year, everyone.
I'm looking forward to seeing you next week!

Fri Jan 05, 01:20:00 PM 2007

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